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05 July 2009 @ 10:56 pm
[Fanfiction:] Song for you (Drabble)  

Oh, I know, I know, I'm so spamming you guys. Soooorry. But I just ahd a walk and that song was randomly playing and I couldn't resist this little drabble >_<"
I was planning to write something for Tanabata, but as much as I'm spamming you with Tegomass I probably skip that v.v


However, on we go to the drabble.

Title: Song for you
Pairing: Tegomass
Disclaimer: Nothing's mine, all is yours.
Rating: G
Summary: How to confess, if you can't say it.
A/N: short, pointless. Sorry. Tegoshi POV.


Song for you

[I've been so many places in my life and time
I've sung a lot of songs, I've made some bad rhyme
I've acted out my life in stages with ten thousand people watching
But we're alone now and I'm singing this song for you]

 

A soft melody is filling the silence.
We sit side by side; I can feel your sleeve slightly brushing mine while I move my hand over my acoustic guitar. We both don’t say a word, you stare at the ceiling of the room, and I concentrate on slowly playing the guitar.  

In a mute and soft voice I sing; all the words that were always hidden in my heart. I can’t say them, never could; so now I sing them for you.
Look at me once; listen to me carefully.

Can you hear them?

 

[You taught me precious secrets, The truth with holding nothing
You came out in front, and I was hiding
Oh, but now I'm so much better, So if my words don't come together
Listen to the melody, 'Cause my love’s in there hiding…]

 

You turn your head, watch my hands and then you close your eyes as you lean back again.
I keep singing, my eyes fixed on your face. But you don’t notice, do you?

Listen carefully.

I stop singing, only the melody fills the room again and a smile traces your lips. You look relaxed and satisfied; as if you were enjoying it.
Do you listen? Can you hear?

Suddenly, your eyes open and you turn your head, that gentle smile faces me now.

“It’s a beautiful love song, isn’t it?”

I return the smile slightly and face the wall then, trying to avoid your gaze. My fingers keep on slightly tugging the strings. “It is, indeed.”

I start to sing again.

 

[And when my life is over, remember when we’re together,
We were alone, and I was singing my song… for you.]



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Thanks for reading <3


 
 
Mood: creativecreative
Music: Michael Bublé- Song for You
 
 
 
falling_petal01falling_petal01 on July 5th, 2009 07:49 pm (UTC)
Awww short but sweet!
Some how peaceful, i could feel myself swaying side to side when i was reading this story ^^
Shainayumiko_okahawa on July 6th, 2009 02:52 am (UTC)
Aw, thanks so much for reading ^_^ I'm glad you liked it. It really is just so dhort *laugh*
<333333
iolekeiiolekei on July 5th, 2009 10:26 pm (UTC)
*hearts*hearts*hearts*
Gah, I'm melting, seriously <3

Oh how I wish it was longer~~~
Shainayumiko_okahawa on July 6th, 2009 02:53 am (UTC)
Aw, I'm sorry. It's no big deal at all... just something that came to my mind and was written down in within 10 minutes or something XD

But I'm glad you liked it :D
<333
treegonometrytreegonometry on July 6th, 2009 12:42 am (UTC)
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
*glomps computer and simultaneously melts into a pile of goo.*
Shainayumiko_okahawa on July 6th, 2009 02:55 am (UTC)
Haha, this time it would be me saying people usually go "???????????" when they read this XD
Thanks so much for reading, dear ^_^
treegonometry: seto kouji hoodie.treegonometry on July 6th, 2009 04:44 am (UTC)
:DDDD
maybe i just read into things too much BUT.
i love this <333

Shaina: Tesshi Smileyumiko_okahawa on July 6th, 2009 05:16 am (UTC)
I guess, we both tend to read too much into things... but then again, drabbles like this one are made to read too much into them :3

thanks <333333
treegonometrytreegonometry on July 6th, 2009 05:20 am (UTC)
art messes with your brain oh yes it does. XD
tego♥massu=LOVEkatrinasacay on July 6th, 2009 02:57 am (UTC)
short but sweet...
and a little bit sad.
Shainayumiko_okahawa on July 6th, 2009 05:15 am (UTC)
It has a slight melancholic touch to it, hasn't it? XD
I'm glad you like it :) <333
andee: tegomassu rabuannedee08 on July 6th, 2009 08:42 am (UTC)
oh beautiful~
so simple yet so sweet =3
pipu_com on October 15th, 2009 07:07 pm (UTC)
comment
Hi there, ^^
I'm visiting your fanfiction site cause Asu-chan gave me the tipp to read some of your works and maybe I find the courage to start to write fanfiction in english, too. ^^

Ähm, actually, I wanted to post a comment at your lj green_feelings, but somehow, I landed here. Well, anyway.

About this drabble (really, I've never heard of this word before and couldn't even find it in the online dictionary, but I get the signification of it^^) - I LOVE the lyrics in the beginning and wish, there'd be more!
The rhymes are so great! The little story is also cute and you'll get desire for more! :D
I will read more of your works! ^^
Greetings!
Pipu
Shaina: Tesshi Brown Lightsyumiko_okahawa on October 16th, 2009 04:43 am (UTC)
Re: comment
Heya! ^_^

Aw, I haven't heard from Atsuki for a while, I guess. But wow, she recommended me .. for real? O_o
That's nice.
And I hope you can find that courage!
I suppose you're german, too, then? Writing in german is good, too. German is easier to articulate, I think. I always struggle with English and I think my writing is not really that good, dince I lack a lot of vocabulary v.v
But, still, it's easier to reach the fandom this way, so I'm trying anyway~
(Talking too much... Sorry!)

Aw, sorry about tha. I linked back to all of my works there, but I just recently started that journal, because this journal here is my personal one and I wanted to seperate my works from it. But I used to post my fics here :)

I hadn't heard of it, either. But, well, the fandom calls short pieces that, so I just picked it up *löl*
If you want all of the lyrics, the title of this drabble is the title of the song as well. It's a song by Michael Buble. ^^

Thanks for saying you want to read more. Is it Tegomass you like? I guess I'm completely into tegomass v.v But I write Akame, too... (judging from your icon, I suppose you at least like Jin~ ^^)

Thanks a lot!
Greeting,
Shai~ <3
pipu_com on October 16th, 2009 01:09 pm (UTC)
Re: comment
Don't worry, don't worry - it's a normal disease behavior for authors to write to much. ;D I was holding back on my first comment here, cause didn't know, if you were approved of "long" comments. *g* And I normally write really LONG comments.
^^
Do you already now my homepage, our fanfiction workshop www.pi-pu.com? I mean, maybe Asu has recommended that to you, too. ^^ This homepage I created especially for posting looong comments. *ggg*

Yeah, I'm a german author, but not really german by birth- but my nationality is german. ^^

You're right, the english fandom is much wider - you've got a lot of comments. ^^

Thanks for the info about the lyrics.

I'm not so into News, just Yamapi cause of my writing work, but I don't dislike Tegomass. ^^ When reading text, I just let me being suprise and normally don't care much about my preferences. I alwayss depends on how the author has written the text, to make it good. I can read everything. ^^ Asu was recommending you, cause you're supposed to chose the right english words and I got curious. ^^ And I really like it!
About Jin, well - yeah, he's really my weakness *hahaha*

Read you next time! I'll try giving constructive comments! :D
Greetings!
Shaina: Nao Childyumiko_okahawa on October 18th, 2009 04:57 am (UTC)
Re: comment
Haha, that's probably true :) I even talk too much. I never keep my mouth shut; it really is a bad disease v.v

Long comments are a good thing, though ^^
I've been at your yournal already and had a look around. You're writing Shun *_*// I will give it a try this week, I guess ^.^
Atsuki hasn't told me yet about that homepage, but I'll check it out and will look around what you've guys posted up there :)

To me the pairing and characters are quite important, somehow. I start to read a fanfiction because of the pairing, mostly v.v Recently, I only read Tegomass. I am writing Akame, too, but I don't actually read any akame ffs O.o *löl*

Jin, it's always Jin. How do you guys keep up with him? *laugh*
No, seriously. I like him, too, but he's not really a favourite of mine. From kat-tun it would be Ueda :) He's adorable and such a lovely person; I really like him a lot! ^^
ou could say I tend to like the girly looking boys in JE O.o Because my favourite is Tegoshi; and he is such a girl v.v

By now, I really do have quite some comments, but when I first started posting here, I didn't have any at all.
I started an Akame Project a year ago and when I've posted the first chapter, there were about three people commenting on it. As the whole fanfiction ended this year in June, I had ... well, so many comments; I was stunned how many people actually read that fanfic. Now, that I started a new one, there were lots of people commenting. because they already knew me ^^;;
As for Tegomass, well, the fandom isn't that huge and we just have a few authors here at LJ who post regulary. So, well... It's always disappointing to say, but you just need to get people to know you.
I don't think there are many people not already knowing me, starting to read my works.

However, now, it really gets too much O_o Thanks so much for taking your time! ^^
<333
pipu_com on October 22nd, 2009 05:47 pm (UTC)
talk talk talk ^^
So you like the feminine slim type of guys? *g* Me, too - half-half. I won't mind dating a japanese guy looking like that. ^^ As long as he's not as weak as he might appears.

I hope we don't misunderstand each other - the user I'm talking about "asu" is this user http://xxasukixx.livejournal.com/
Cause you've written 2x "Atsuki" - sorry, I'm not friends with some user named Atsuki. ^^°°°
But never mind.

I like Jin and also Kame, but I can't bring myself to read Akame-FFs, sorry. Most of them are too much slash for me... I guess, I'm too realistic for that...
I hope, you aren't disappointed. Well, this is an antigonism to my former comment that I could read everything. But if somehow you get to like my comments and just want to know my opinion, I'll be willing to read one of your Akames FFs. Cause my pen author friends are also reading my J-Music/J-Entertainment related stories although they're arent fans.
I mean, giving an opinion about the story telling is okay. ^^ I mean, if it's "work" realated, I can read everything and comment to help someone with his writing work. That's what I mean. ^^

Read you soon! ^^
Shaina: Tesshi Artyumiko_okahawa on October 23rd, 2009 01:21 am (UTC)
Re: talk talk talk ^^
I do. I somehow always did, even back then, when we were still into J-Rock. It's a little strange, though.

I know, I know. v_v" Audrey just recently told me as well, and I can't explan why, but I just always thought that "t" was there *laugh* Oh man, I am really stupid, sometimes. It was just always there for me v.v
I'll have to apologize to her sometime ^^;;

Ah, no, that wasn't meant like that at all. I don't want you to read anything, not at all. What doesn't mean that your opinion wouldn't make me interested, but it's not necessary at all.
I myself only read Tegomass Fanfictions, with some exceptions when I come along something I find interesting.
What I've said about comments was really just about LJ; how people tend to be here.

However, thanks a lot; I will reply to your other comments, as soon as I'm back home ^__^
<333

By the way, what may I call you? <3
pipu_com on October 24th, 2009 09:02 am (UTC)
Re: talk talk talk ^^
If I get addicted to your writing style I'll read even your Akame-FFs. ;P It all depends on the writing style and you can sell every story! ;)

You may call me Pu Bea (two syllables), it's my real name. ^^ Here's my blog as official author:
http://schwertkrabbe.wordpress.com/

Read you next time! ^^
Shainayumiko_okahawa on October 25th, 2009 06:46 am (UTC)
Re: talk talk talk ^^
Aw, I wouldn't say that! I can't sell every story for sure. I need to like the charcters, at least XDDDD ^^
But thanks for the lovely compliment *bows*

Oh, ou even have a blog as an official writer *_*// I need to start reading your works, really. I didn't get to it so far, and I don't know for the next two weeks whether I'll be able to, but I'd love to. I need stuff to read, but my time is cut short to do so v.v

Oky, then I'll call you Pu Bea~~ That sounds really cute, if I may say that ^^

Until next time ~~ <3